Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.

Why do you think this is happening?

What can the government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is quite clear that the amount of waste allover the world is increasing day after another. Every single house produces a huge amount of rubbish every week. There have been many wonders and arguments about the cause of that extension of produced extras. Is it because people consumption have been increasing or is it because the way food and beverages are packed and transported is different!

In the old days, the amount of waste of a house was much more less than it is today. The woman of the house used to make use of everything she has and she does not throw anything unless it is really useless. For example, in the last century, mainly between the 70s and the early 90s, people used to make washing soap at home. They made use of the leftovers of the consumed soap with some other ingredients and produce soap for hand wash. Of course, they had time to spend a whole day on that process.

Nowadays, women are so busy, life is so quick and time passes so fast. A family living in a house order delivery once or twice weekly. The packing of such food results in rubbish. In addition, the dependency on packed food and canned beverages increased. Everything needed is there in the supermarket, packed in foam and wrapped with plastic film. Even if it happened that a person goes to buy vegetables from a glossary, it is put in a plastic bag. So, I believe that the way food is wrapped plays a big role in the expantion of waste amount. Moreover, the rely on junk and semi-prepared food contributes in the problem.

The government can save the country from that issue and its consequences. It can to improve the people's awareness of the issue in many ways. For example, it can give speeches about the topic in the media specially the talk shows. The government can investigate how to make use of that rubbish may be by recycling it or so. It is kind of investment that worth doing it. The country residents should also help into this since no one would like to face the effect of those tons of poisoning waste.

In conclusion, this is our world and we should all do our duty to save it and save ourselves.

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Sentence: So, I believe that the way food is wrapped plays a big role in the expantion of waste amount.
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