Some people think people can exploit animals for any purpose they need , while others do not think so. What is your opinion?

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Some people think people can exploit animals for any purpose they need , while others do not think so. What is your opinion?

Undoubtedly nature is one of the most wonderful creations of god. All living being which dwell in this are associated with each other for some or the other reason. This is termed as life cycle. Indeed it is a nature’s law that everything is in connection for smooth functioning and survival. Certainly human being on earth is superior to all other species. Therefore, there are set of people who tend to think that human being can exploit animals for their necessity, while others refutes to this view point. I would agree to large extent with the former view and would like to present my inclination further.

Firstly, exploitation of animals for mankind is the practice followed since ages. For instance, in early days people use to plough land for farming with the help of cows and buffalo. In addition to this even these days there are many consumer oriented products produces with the help of animals ingredients after extraction. Such as, Milk , Butter , Cheese from cow, edible oil from fishes, red and white meat products are also prescribed by doctors for healthy living. Moreover, with the use of animals we human being are inhabiting since inception, history states that human beings used to wear cloths made of animals skins , so overall it is the fact that mankind is depending on animals for their routine life.

On the other hand, there are people who oppose to this view with some understanding. Although it is true that human beings are benefited from the animals, the dominating nature of human tries to exploit animals for any purpose they need. Therefore to my understanding exploiting animals is fair but certainly not on the cost of animal blood. For instance, people who like to keep pets in their house keep them and when these pets are affected by some ill health they leave them to die on the streets. Adding up to this even hunting of animals is practiced for fun sake by teenagers in some part of nation. Thus I strongly feel that exploitation of animals in this manner is crime as per constitutional law of animal rights. Whereas, everyone should understand that alike all this animals do have feelings and emotions.

However, to sum up I would state that exploit animals so as to maintain smooth and proper life cycle. It is all about give and take relationship with humans and animals. We all are linked with each other, so it is obvious that to keep a well balanced equilibrium human being should follow the chain life cycle. If not the planet will be in a vicious circle and would be difficult cope up this situation.

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Sentence: Whereas, everyone should understand that alike all this animals do have feelings and emotions.
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Sentence: For instance, in early days people use to plough land for farming with the help of cows and buffalo.
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