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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of society; others however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.
It is certainly a matter of discussion for both parents and teachers whether who should be responsible to teach children to be a good member of society. However both the views need to be examined before commenting on a final decision. My inclination is argued further.
Focusing on the former view point it can be said that today’s children are future of our tomorrow. Children inculcate those habits which he see around and understand as per their intellect. Therefore for any child to be a good member of our society has to be indeed a key factor for which every one of us should focus. It’s correct to say MOTHER IS THE FIRST TEACHER OF CHILD. Children are at their tender age whatever the surrounding atmosphere their upbringing is done their values and ethics are set accordingly. Child begins to learn from his House therefore first initiatives should be taken by parents to teach their children.
On the other hand the latter view points out in reverse direction; school is the place where most of the time is spent by children for their regular learning and building intellect. Teachers play a vital role in schools they are also an integral part of child life, teacher is the one who nurture child in good path and makes him confident to compete the world, book knowledge and morality lessons patriotism are well thought in schools but they also have to be executed in life for being good member of society. For any child household atmosphere is important – cultural values, relationship building get an exposure in house so both Schools and house is responsible for children to be a good member of society.
Hence in the light of above discussion it can be concluded that both parents and teachers are equally responsible for children being a good member of society. Youth being a future, need to get proper attention and atmosphere to grow. As child is going to reciprocate the same which is taught. Hence Parents and Schools should take collective interest in children upbringing for better citizen.
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