Essay topic:
Some People think it would be good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
PAPA (Indian Term for Father) which according to me IS “ PARENTS ARE PRECIOUS TO ALL.”
PARENTHOOD is a true feeling of being BLESSED. In today scenario nuclear families prevail. Both parents are working professionals therefore in this culture it’s very important that both parents are aware about what is needed for being a Good Parent. So the idea for schools to involve in teaching young person about parenting is definitely good thought which will contribute in many terms to society. My inclination is argued further.
In accordance to the former view, I strongly agree to it and would like to put forth the details as below. There a many books on parenting , which states that parenting is a big responsibility and everyone should be aware about this topic , if parenting is incorporated as a subject in schools to higher standards it will be very useful. As adolescent is the age when children are at the stage of being Adult, this is the phase when majority of changes in the behavior takes place. Adolescence is the time when young children take keen interest in building their Identity and look at things with future foresight. Therefore this age is a perfect age group to study parenting as subject. It’s a notion that schools knowledge is well executed in regular life. Young children build their intellect to compete the world, mean while if parenting is taught they can relate the situation of their parents and understand the family issues as well.
Schools also have PTA Meeting - Parents Teachers Association Meeting where teachers discuss about children progress report. Like such meetings schools can also organize courses on PARENTING SKILLS. Parenting is an art of learning which every one of us already know, but the execution is not at times proper. Parents nowadays get too much busy in all materialistic and luxurious need for their kids and in this they oversight the fact that KIDS also need care ,love, affection from parents.
The skills which need to be incorporated among parents are as listed. Children need their parents In all walks of life, its parents responsibility to intervene with child whenever required for their betterment. Moreover , trust this is a big factor in every relationship, parents should be sure enough that their Values are inheriting in their Child. To be Authoritative is important with this your child will be Co-operative towards you. Don Be demanding authoritarian parents do not contribute good in their child’s upbringing. Authoritarian Parenting style has BISS Factor – Because I said So – This will lead to your child being Inactive / Shy / Nervous.
To sum up all, in my opinion I strongly support the idea of schools teaching young person about how be to good parent. As this is very crucial topic and nurturing good values in young age will contribute to society as well. Also If your person learns Parenting as a subject will not only help him to be good parents but also he can well understand the situation and feel the same what his parents have been through.
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