Topic: It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience.

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Topic: It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience.

Families play a predominant role in one’s life. However, nowadays, families are getting appart due to the impact of globalization and some unique commitments. In this essay, i contend this view with the help of number of reasons and suggest some solutions to atleast lower the distance between these family arrangements.

The foremost reason behind current nuclear family structure is the globalization. It has brought competition and strong commitment level. A person needs to come out from family environment for education and work. Slowly, within time passes, the bond of togetherness starts to fade. The next reason is the stress and fierce environment. In the past, even after small family fights no one in the family could ever thought to separate from each other. But, today even after a small violence at home. The decision ends with separate accommodation. Eventually, families remain not so close.

However, there are number of solutions that can increase the closeness among those separate members. At first point, the festivals like Christmas, Diwali and thanks giving days are doing its best, to celebrate these events, families can get together at least for moments. This will show their love and affection to each other. Automatically, they will try to arrange more events to again meet and enjoy. Moreover, governments can arrange family competitions and encourage the families of different generations to participate, For instance, grandparent, parent and children can try to compete as a team, this will lower the stress level within them and they feel cared and together. Apart from all, schools and workplaces can invite the families on special events and appreciate the big families of the day with some momentum or appreciation certificates. In fact, this will make their minds to go together and show their bonds and closeness to set an example for others.

To conclude, nuclear family decision does not mean they cannot be close by hearts. The only need is to create some moments around them so that their fading bonds will take a novelty shape of devotion to each other.

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