Two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A glance at provided two maps reveals significant alterations and discrepancy between the island prior to putting up holidaymaker facilities as well as the here and now conditions of the island.

Among all of the facilities that have been created, most significant construction is erecting two centralized accommodation collections at the western and directly at the heart of the island. Of equal importance is establishment of pier at the southern part in an effort to provide accessibility by marine transport modes to the island. Since majority of essentials have been created, there was need for entertaining tourists and this has lead to construction of restaurant and swimming area. They are located in the north-west and western part sections respectively in order to satisfy recreational desires of holidaymakers.

Entering and departing from island is controlled by reception building which has been put up in the middle of accommodation complexes.

All in all, the evidence of creation of adequate tourist condition can be implied from the supplied map.

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Sentence: A glance at provided two maps reveals significant alterations and discrepancy between the island prior to putting up holidaymaker facilities as well as the here and now conditions of the island.
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