"Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children. But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life. Who in your opinion should take the responsibility of child care now?" Give your opinion in no less than 250 words.

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"Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children. But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life. Who in your opinion should take the responsibility of child care now?" Give your opinion in no less than 250 words.

There is no doubt that mothers play a paramount role to raise the child, but due to the fact that both parents are working, children need same care and affection form alternatives ways. In my opinion, such responsibility should start form parents especially mother to grandparents and kinder garden schools.

Firstly, mother should devote time to up bring the child as this will ramp up the family bonds. At least for first two years of little one, she should have maternity leave so as to show her affection and devotion to the infact. Alternatively, mother can work part time hours owing to the fact that during early years, child needs breastfeed and recognition. Here, businesses should help to its workers, who, newly, became mothers, with paid leave at least for particular period.

Secondly, grandparents play an important role in children’s life. For example, throughout the years, it has been argued that grandparents bring culture, tradition, values and social bonds in the children's life. They can teach them while providing same care as parents do. However with the trend of neutral family structure grandparents either live far or never care much of their grandchildren. Therefore, such situation again upraises the same question of care.

Lastly, but not least, the recent years, the other options like baby sitter and kinder garden schools have proven to take a lead for this job. For example, baby sitter remains whole day at home to care the child while mother is away. In addition to it, kinder garden schools are especially for the little ones to care in an environment with other children.They play in a social environment and somehow, learn qualities like d being diligent, public speaker and dignity. However according to the recent research, this has been proved that in such environment, a child would be deprived from cultural, emotional and parenthood qualities, due to the fact that such schools cannot override the role of mother, no matter, how successful those are in providing care.

To recapitulate, there are number of alternatives, as stated, for up bring the child and some have proven to be an effective choice. However, this is hard to find an exact replacement of mother’s role because children still need much devoted person like mother although this could accompany other options.

Sentence: There is no doubt

Sentence: There is no doubt that mothers play a paramount role to raise the child, but due to the fact that both parents are working, children need same care and affection form alternatives ways.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to alternatives and ways

Sentence: At least for first two years of little one, she should have maternity leave so as to show her affection and devotion to the infact.
Error: infact Suggestion: infant

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