Task 2 - Many people believe that best way to produce a happier society is to ensure a that there is small differences of earning between the riches members. and poorest members. ( agree or disagree ).

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Task 2 - Many people believe that best way to produce a happier society is to ensure a that there is small differences of earning between the riches members. and poorest members. ( agree or disagree ).

Happiness is the most desirable part of life. Some people argue that equal income level among rich and poor people will help to create a joyful society due to the fact that this will bring a sense of equality, less competition for luxurious things and social harmony. In this essay, I will contend supporting arguments to this view and provide examples to elaborate its strong need in the society.

There is no doubt that level of earning impact upon the status of society and its happiness. Firstly, income would bring poor people to equal lifestyle of society and this will create a sense of equality among them. For example, in most of the Asian countries, most of the rich people do not like to invite and talk to the persons who are living in slum condition owing to the fact that they think that this will lower their status. However, if they have same income and lifestyle then nobody like to think about others background status. Secondly, there will be less competition to buy new luxurious items. For instance, this is a scientific phenomenon that a human likes to buy things by imitating others in the society. Equal earning means very similar lifestyle and mentality to save money. Hence they would not have any curiosity and social pressure to buy expensive items. Lastly, all such conditions lead towards social harmony where people give value to family, friends and society than to run around money and higher lifestyle.

However, this is inevitable to avoid that only better earning does not bring happiness. There is also a need to change thinking of people to pay equal respect and dignity to every culture, believes and human existence. For instance, terrorist and corrupt people of society, who have the chance to have good earning, family, friends and high status in the society, do not value to social bonds and harmony. The only need is to change and divert their mentality rather just considering income level to bring happiness in the society and nation. Not only does this, for most of the people earning do not impact on their happiness other than good healthy family, habitat and high attitude. Nevertheless happier society could eliminate these factors up to a high extent and to bring greater value to life, family and society.

To recapitulate, there is no doubt that good and equal income impacts more on happy society than any other factors. The only need is to consider all such conditions to at least enable every member of the society to upgrade their status to equality and social harmony.

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