The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are two figures comparing the number of people visiting sports, theme parks and cinemas in 2009 as well as the admission prices to these places. It is clear from the information provided that movie theatres were by far the most popular entertainment destination and the tickets for football events were more expensive than that of other activities.
More specifically, cinemas came top in terms of attendance, reaching more than 1000 thousand visitors. In addition, well under 400 thousand people visited theme parks which was double that of sports, at only nearly 150 thousand.
Turning to ticket fees, the highest belonged to football game – AFL, at $75 for single ticket and $298 for 4-member family one. This event was followed closely by football game – NRL and NRU. Besides, theme parks ranked fourth, costing $70 and $210 for the two modes. When it comes to the next three venues, the prices were considerably lower. Finally, movie theatres were not only the most favourable places among attendees but also the cheapest form of entertainment.
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