The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have a several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that is continuous throughout life.

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have a several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that is continuous throughout life.

As we are now living in a modern world, It is amazing how life gets busy and people get busier. Doing multiple jobs and having additional education for all walks of life has become the latest trend, while, people with one profession seem to be out of touch in our time. Since many people prefer to earn money by doing various jobs or take further education, regardless of their age and background, they hold the opinion that having one particular work is boring. I believe that working in one chosen career is more beneficial and rewarding.

There is no denying that family, career, education and social life all together could be a case of biting off more than one can chew. Thus, having a single job will balance the time of every aspect of life as well as being more beneficial to everybody. As a result, people have more quality time to spend with family and friends, and most importantly people have more time to relax and enjoy being free from any time pressure and stress. For instance, based on my own experience, I chose to work only during weekends. So, I have enough time for myself, to communicate with my friends and of course more bonding moments with my husband and kids, which I truly love the most.

In addition, mastering one particular job is more rewarding, unlike working in different jobs where confusion and exhaustion are a common dilemma. However, going back to school to pursue an additional qualification is worth doing most especially in achieving a higher position in the near future. But, unfortunately, further education is time and money consuming, most especially for people with limited resources and a young family that needs to be taken care of. Therefore, having a single career in this world which never sleeps is fruitful, because people have more opportunity to excel and to be more efficient at work. Consequently people are bound to be appreciated and rewarded. Take the case of my friend who used to be a teacher. She told me that every time she heard a success story from her former students. She felt nothing but pride because all her effort in teaching certainly paid off.

In conclusion, people having a single career in the fast paced world we live in is logical because it is more rewarding and beneficial. I believe that working in one particular job should be maintained and continued in the future,so, people have a chance to enjoy the most essential parts of life, which are family, friendship and love.

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