Essay topic:
You are looking for a part-time job.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
and say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in regards to graduate accounting vacancies available at your employment agency.
I am a recent bachelor of accounting graduate from Bond University. Throughout my university studies, I worked as a part-time customer service assistant at McDonald, hence, have acquired excellent customer service and communication skills. Last December, I further interned at J&S Pty Ltd, a small fashion firm, as an accounts receivable officer and was mainly responsible for completing bookkeeping tasks and liaising with customers. Over a period of 3 months, I was, thus, able to acquire extensive accounting experience in the fashion and became adept at employing accounting software.
I am currently seeking to extend this accounting experience by securing a position as a part-time graduate accountant in a small or medium company in any industry. I am available to commence work immediately.
I have attached my resume with this letter and am willing to discuss my application in further details at any time convenient to you.
Yours faithfully,
Sarah
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 8
No. of Words: 162 150
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No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.568 3.7
Average Word Length: 5.228 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.178 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 50
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 20
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 10
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.949 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.46 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.698 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 3
Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 8
No. of Words: 162 150
No. of Characters: 847 800
No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.568 3.7
Average Word Length: 5.228 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.178 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 50
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 20
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 10
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.949 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.46 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.698 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 3