Essay topic:
You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
-ask them for help finding accommodation
-tell them where you would like to live
-tell them the type of place you are looking for
Dear John and Mary-Jane,
How have you been? I have not heard from you since the Christmas party organized by Bob last year. I have some pleasant news to share with you. I have recently been promoted to manager and will be moving to Sydney as part of this new position.
As longstanding residents of that city, I was hoping that you could help me with my accommodation search, especially with inspections and negotiations with leasing agents. I am particularly looking for a place in or near the central business district since I will be working there. I would prefer living within walking distance to a train station or a bus stop as driving to the city can be quite troublesome during peak hours and parking can also be expensive.
I am not fussy about the type of accommodation but will gladly accept apartments, house flats, studios or any other type of dwellings. Rent is not an issue as my company will be settling the bill. But a place with one bedroom, a private bathroom and a kitchen will be sufficient as I do not wish to spend my time cleaning a large area. Of course, you are free to make any suggestion.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Cheers
Bob
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 199 150
No. of Characters: 874 800
No. of Different Words: 129 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.756 3.7
Average Word Length: 4.392 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.623 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 50
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 20
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 10
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.586 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 3
Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 199 150
No. of Characters: 874 800
No. of Different Words: 129 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.756 3.7
Average Word Length: 4.392 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.623 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 50
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 20
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 10
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.586 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 3