Essay topic:
Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it. You need to explain:
- when are where you hired it
- describe how the accident happened
- what kind of action did you take after the accident
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in regards to the car which I hired on the 24th of October 2012 at around noon at Melbourne Tullamarine Airport. My registration number is AM 24000689.
Unfortunately, the car was damaged in a minor accident involving another vehicle while I was driving in the central business district on the same day. The other drive failed to stop at a red light and almost collided into the right door of my car at an intersection. Though he managed to brake beforehand, he was unable to avoid the side mirror which was completely ruined from his carelessness.
As a result, I filled in the necessary reports and insurance forms. On a positive note, the other party’s insurance company will be able to cover any extra cost which is not included in the insurance policy I subscribe to when I hired the car.
I sincerely apologize for this incident. Should you wish to obtain further information about it, feel free to contact me.
Yours faithfully,
John Byrne
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Score: 9.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
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Score: 9.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
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No. of Words: 164 150
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.579 3.7
Average Word Length: 4.567 4.6
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